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Review:inferioridiot says:
I am not a very good reviewer, but I would just like to say that I've been reading this for the whole week on top of tests and presentations that I iught to have been doing and this has consumed my mind for far too long to settle this fanfic as a fleeting kind of read -- this is the kind that would make me remember even after a long time has passed, one where I will most likely be re-reading and re-reading and recommending to other people. Tiberious' choice to be in war intrigues me, and how it will turn out trips me in uneasiness even more. I'd love to know what happens next, especially with Moody's inclusion as an important, feeling character in the story. :D

Author's Response: It's very nice of you to have taken the time to review! It's a perfectly good review - a great one, in fact (most people who think they're not good at reviewing actually are). I can't believe that this story has affected you so much, and I'm sorry that it's distracted you from your schoolwork. (I can sympathize though - fanfiction has held me in thrall while I should have been studying for exams.) It's every author's dream to write something memorable. Thank you very much for the compliments!

What you've said at the end speaks directly to the problem I'm having with finishing this story. He does have a choice to go or not, and it doesn't even make sense to me why he does - is it to prove himself to Minerva? To escape the label of coward? As punishment for how he treated Myrtle and failed to successfully prove her murder? It's all of these things, I guess. But how to write that in a way that isn't disappointing?

I can only hope that I'll be able to come up with something that will make your week spent reading this story worthwhile. It's not likely, but I will try. :)

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