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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
Swap! :D

The flashback was a nice way to start this chapter. Erg, typical older sibling -- too cool to hang around the younger one (I was the older sibling, so I was naturally cooler -- I know the code :p). Baha, she jealous of Lucius' hair? That's completely understandable, as the Malfoy's are known for their awesome hair (in addition to their snobbery). Whoo! She was good, she must've felt so proud of herself to have the older boys compliment her on her Quiddich skills.

Whoa boy, Gryffindor pride is decidedly loud :D. Oh, at least the Slytherins gave a little noise for their team!

Hooray for Quiddich action! Epic music is playing in the background, MacDonald as the commentator, and GO! Ouch...yeah, Bludgers can't feel good! Yeah, dudes stop cheating! You're giving the Gryffies penalty...gah! Omph, SLYTHERIN WON!! *fanfare* Hooray!! That was an awesome match...and my team won! Whoo!

Oh yeah, I'm sure James wasn't overly enthused that he lost (to the Slytherins :p -- House pride!). *Cough* Sorry, I'll be a gracious victor from now on ;).

Aww, with the flirting with Sirius.

"We flew on dragons" -- pfft. Awesome.

The transfigurations...bahaha! And then with "Sirius meowed" and "a tiger is a cat". Heheh. That was funny.

Uhoh, they've probably chosen to follow the Marauders on the WRONG night, haven't they? Oh yes they did -- given the looks on Sirius, James, and Peter's faces.

Eheheh, first Apparition attempts! I don't think I'd ever be able to do so...I get way too distracted.

Mph, I guess you can't blame the Marauders very much there for being a bit wary of Melanie and Mandy...they're just trying to protect Remus. So I suppose that they are good friends to have :D!

Of course, if the password is not blueberry muffins, then surely it is chocolate-chip muffins. No? Worth a shot.

Befouling library books? That's just rude.

Imperius curse...uhoh. There's a war brewing *closes eyes* -- gah! I know how this war ends *sniffles*. I don't wanna look!

Great chapter, by the way ;).

-Rumpel

Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you liked the flashback! Hah, I'm the older sibling too :p Anyone would be jealous of Lucius' luscious locks, am I right?! (Lol, he should have started a hairstyling salon with that name. But I digress.)

I'm happy that you liked the quidditch match! And yes, hooray for Slytherin :D

Nothing quite like showing off and having it not work out correctly haha.

I think I'd be terrible at Apparition! I get distracted really easily too!

yeah, they chose the wrong night for a prank, and I think that having Slytherins follow them (again) would make them pretty wary and not as friendly for a while. :-/

The war... yeah, its out there, in the background...

I am so glad to hear that this was a great chapter. Thanks so much for another wonderful review! Your reviews always make me smile!


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