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Review:Pixileanin says:
Hi there. I decided to skip on over from review tag.

This story makes me wonder if there's anything in the "guy code" about dating an ex's sister or not. Not being a guy, I have no idea, but it's curious.

I am very fond of the "friends becoming more" scenario. This one-shot describes that beautifully. It was fun to read the sweet moments that you captured between these two characters. I could tell through your writing that the two characters had a good friendship bond built up, so it was nice to see them both get the chance to express their deeper feelings for each other and have it turn out for the better.

The way you incorporated magic into the story was also nicely done. I'm always wondering other things too, like how far can a portkey really take someone? And did Teddy have to pay extra for a portkey to a secluded beach? Oh, the questions... not that I expected your fic to answer these questions. They're just speculative meanderings in my head that come about from time to time. :) I really like how Teddy allowed Dom an entire two hours to unwind before he got down to business. That really says something about how much he cares for her. He definitely had her best interests at heart.

Your writing was nice and clean, and your descriptions painted a clear picture of the surroundings and the way that these two felt about each other.

A nice, feel-good piece!

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Haha I think its only us girls who have "codes" like that - at least all my guy friends don't have those so I applied it to Teddy too xP

I love the scenario myself and I am pleased you liked the way I wrote it. It's nice to know you understood my characters and what I was trying to portray as well =)

Well, of course I can't answer these questions in the story but in my head canon, I feel like portkeys can take you anywhere but you've to get them approved by the ministry and depending on the distance you want to cover, the ministry will assign you a suitable one. And I guess the farther you want to go, the more you've to pay. But that's just all in my head xD

Teddy definitely cares for Dom a lot and he wants her to feel completely at ease before expressing his feelings =)

Thank you for your lovely comments. I am pleased you liked it!

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