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Review:The Ghost Of His Last Laugh says:
To be honest, this chapter just did not hold my attention. All the segues into different times were too much and it really didn't need to be in all italics, since you specifically said it was in the past at the beginning. I think you should try using transitions instead of the line breaks. Line breaks are ok every once in a while, but not every paragraph. I like the story, but this chapter just didn't do it for me.

Author's Response: I didn't transition the sections because they are not transitional events. The events are all independent of each other and take place throughout the third and fourth books, with JKR's canon work intended to be in between. The entire chapter is in italics because it is a memory. That is my style. That is how I separate the past from the present: italics, whether or not I mention the time frame in my AN. I like to keep my consistency. Not all readers actually read the author's note. I know I don't always read it on other stories. I'm sorry that this chapter didn't hold your attention. However it is extremely important to the story seeing as it is the foundation for the ENTIRE story. This is in fact the most important chapter thus far. Maybe this just isn't the story for you. Have a nice day. DahliasQuill

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