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Review:Akussa says:
One year ago, almost to the day, we were set for a review exchange in the common house. You held your part of the deal and, well, I kind of lost tr ack of my Internet life due to the arrival of my daughter and getting adjusted to being a mom and then a working mom... All this to say that I feel horrible but I eventually came around and held my part as well, I am, however, very sorry to have made you wait over a year for it...

Onto my review then! What an amazingly powerful opening chapter this is. The descriptions is really nicely done. The scenery came to life and I really felt like I could picture the place and the characters that lived through it.

The characters are so well written; their dialogues are true and heartfelt, nothing seems rigid. I like how you managed to describe them all a little with so few well chosen words. They all have their different personalities and already, it feels like I already know them.

You have really managed to create a sense of dread with this opening chapter. I want to know more about what happened to Lily's parents, how Sirius' situation went and how things are going to develop.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammar errors; it was nicely written and flowed nicely. I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I apologise again about the delay but I got there in the end!

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