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Review:Red_headed_juliet says:
I think you've done a wonderful job, making a story in which the characters sexual orientation isn't defined and doesn't need to be, as gender is irrelevant in what makes them attracted to one another. I was wondering if there was going to be a big reveal, but was kinda happy when there wasn't. I have an ex that doesn't like to be associated with either gender, and has even tried to raise the awareness of gender neutral pronouns. I think Aiden would quite like this story, though I'm quite certain xe hasn't read any Harry Potter books, unfortunately.

The story was brilliantly told. Your characterization, plot, conflict, exposition, grammar, and description is all wonderful. I think you have done a magnificent job all around.

Good luck in the challenge!

RHJ

Author's Response: Hello! :)

I'm so glad you liked it! Writing Thackeray was quite challenging, but in a really positive way, and I liked writing the kind of unconventional love story in which gender doesn't matter.

I'm glad you were happy that Thackeray's gender wasn't revealed - in the end, it felt right that the character remain neutral and that the gender was only a very small part of the story. That's really interesting about your ex - I think it's a fascinating subject in gender studies which is becoming more important and so felt very lucky to be able to integrate these questions into the story.

I'm so thrilled you liked it - I loved writing this story, and really appreciate all your thoughts in these reviews.

Thank you so much! :)


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