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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
Hello!

I absolutely love how you dropped us readers directly into the action! That was awesome! I mean, I have absolutely no idea why Anaxandra is running in the beginning (not that I'm supposed to right away), but you conveyed her terror brilliantly! I love action, and this is some fantastic action!

I can't imagining how frightening this must be: people invading your home in the middle of the night, having the intent to kill or harm or capture you and your family, knowing your sister has been found. Then, of course, being told to by your father to leave him -- to escape with your mother. And then, having your mother abandon you in said escape to return back to your father's aid.

She's never going to see them again, is she?

I'd imagine, from the burning house, that no, she really isn't going to see them ever again.

Wow, that was an intense first chapter, not to mention a fantastic hook!

This was fantastic!

-Rumpel

Author's Response: REVIEW 150! THANK YOU!

Sadly, not every chapter afterwards is as gripping. This was my first ever fanfic, so I didn't really have good development till later in the story. And if you read on, you'll know what happens with her family! *hint hint* Haha. Thank you so much again for reviewing!

--Monica


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