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Review:AlexFan says:
This is the first of four reviews! Sorry for taking so long to get to your prize but I'm finally here now!

I liked the beginning of the story, it definitely pulled me in. I've never read a story that told what Ginny's sixth year must've been like so this is new for me but I love where it's going. I like how you pointed out the differences between the previous years that Ginny had attended Hogwarts and her sixth year. The quiet talking on the platform, the fact that everyone seemed to be avoiding Ginny as much as possible, it really made it clear that things were different than they used to be.

I loved your characterization of Molly as well. You made her sound really tired and worried but you still managed to keep that motherly feel about her. The part that I loved most about Molly was how she started on her usual tangent about eating the sandwiches and doing well in school like normal before she realised that things weren't normal and as they always had been.

My favourite character is definitely Ginny so far. I love how you showed that she was still hung up over Harry even though she doesn't really let anyone see it. That's the kind of thing that Ginny would do, she would probably hide any of her feelings that she didn't want people to see so that they didn't think of her as weak. I love the amount of fire that's in her as well and especially the part where she socked Pansy in the face. The entire time that Pansy kept running her mouth I was just like "don't you be talking smack about my Harry Potter!"

My favourite line was definitely Luna's at the very very end. She just sounded so calm and not at all flustered. You would've thought that Luna would've been a little bit surprised by what happened but she didn't even blink an eye. Then again, this is Luna Lovegood, she's probably seen a lot stranger things happen.

Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad that the beginning is interesting, and not a bore. As far as Molly, she has always come very naturally to me. I'm glad that you liked her. I loved Ginny in the books. I was outraged when her actress in the movies couldn't deliver the spit fire performance I was waiting for, and figured I could do her some justice in this. Lol

I was a little scared to write Luna, but I think she turned out alright, if little chatty. +]

I'm glad you liked the beginning!

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