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Review:Red_headed_juliet says:
Hello! Here for the swap. This is a beautiful beginning to a story. I've seen it several times in the recommended thread, and plan on reading and reviewing on all thechapters as I have time.

As I'm not too familiar with the Black family, I found your descriptions of 'wife' 'son-in-law' and what not very helpful in trying to figure out everyone's relationships.

Also, I do a bit of tarot, and it seems like the card you chose (two of swords) is rather fitting for the chapter. Not sure if you did that on purpose or not, but good job either way. Lol.

I don't have any CC to give, sorry, but it seems as though you've poured a lot into this and I can't think of anything that could be bettered. As I'm working on a mystery (not nearly as dark, but still a mystery) I'm taking mental notes of how you build suspense, and I'm looking for the introduction of clues and sub-conflict. +]

I'll definitely be continuing on with the story as I have time, you've done a wonderful job. Thanks!


Author's Response: Hi there - thanks so much for the swap! I really enjoyed it! :) Gah, I'm so flattered you saw it recommended - I didn't even know it had been recommended! - so thanks so much!

Thanks! :) There are quite a lot of them, and they're all fairly similar to each other in different ways, so I'm glad it was helpful - I know it can be confusing! It was when I was writing it! ;)

Really? That's pretty cool - and, honestly, I had no idea! I chose it mostly because Spades are sort of the 'evil' suit, if that makes sense :P

Gah, thanks so so much! It really is my baby - it's something I wanted to do so much when I got the idea, so I'm really nervous about it, moreso than other things, and I'm so glad you like it! :)

Thank you so so much for the lovely review and the swap! :)

Aph xx

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