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Review:Lostmyheart says:
Wow, the ending was different than I thought.
When you wrote 'we were married for many, happy years' I thought they were divorced.

This one-shot was very sweet and different from what I've read in a long time.
I loved how you wound the quote from jane Austin into the story, I absolutely love her books.
In my opinion, you wrote Ginny perfectly. It would be hard to stay in character, when she's so old and has been through so many things - as I believe we all change continuously through our life.

I had completely forgotten about the incident with the dwarf, so it was funny reading it. How she hated Valentine's Day after that, it was understandable.

As for the no dialogue, it couldn't have been more perfect. She is thinking of their past, their days together, so if she spoke, it would maybe have been out of place.

Loved reading this story :)

Good luck with the challenge!

Love
- A

Author's Response: Hi there! This review was such a lovely surprise, made my day! ♥

I'm glad the ending was surprising! I was hoping for it to seem somewhat mysterious until the end.

That means a lot to me that you thought it was different and original. And thank you, I'm so glad you thought I wrote Ginny perfectly! As you said, yeah she has definitely changed a lot but I'm happy it still sounded like her. I love Jane Austen too! I'm glad you liked the way I integrated the quote :)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, and I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story!


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