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Review:toomanycurls says:
I'm so excited for this chapter I hope it doesn't break my heart. (I kind of sung that as I typed it.)

Remus would be quite surprised that Sirius made it into the library. It does seem like a sensible way for them to spend time together and not fail out of school. Ooh, good use of muffliato there. I think I've said this before but I really love how you make these Prince/Marauder things visible to others in the story but it's not like everyone knows what muffliato is and uses it. I've seen other stories that make it sound like everyone knew what secrets people had at this time. I'm glad you don't!

I like your realism when it comes to students having to apply for jobs while completing their education.

Oh Mandy, such interesting priorities. :D I'm glad she's asking Remus of course!!

I'm a bit nervous about what Mulciber, Snape, et al are up to. Mainly because I'm worried they'll do something to disrupt Mel and Sirius' snogging :P Yes, I have interesting priorities too.

Despite them not meeting each other parents for rather sad reasons, I'm glad that they're making light of it. Mel doesn't have to worry about her table manners - just her showering before dinner manners.

As much as I love Sirius and Mel cuteness, I do like that they don't *have* to spend every moment together. ^_^ Oh but their goodbye is all perfect and snogging. I'm glad you had that in there otherwise I would have mentioned that there could have been snogging. :P

Ah! But it is so cute that they're writing to each other. Very Victorian - in the non-repressed way though.

I got a bit of the awkward from Mandy not having an invite to James' little party. :( She could have been Peter's midnight kiss! oh well

^_^ New years was sweet and adorable. I really liked getting the girl chat between Lily and Mel (which I just typed Lem). She should start thinkng about her future with Sirius. Even though it can't last forever. :( man

Love this chapter!! I'm happy there's another happy relationship chapter.

Ah, what, are they going out on the full moon!?!?

-Rose

Author's Response: Hi! Ooh thanks, I'm glad you like the use of mufliato and other spells where the main characters have no idea what's going on, haha. I think not everyone would be familiar with spells Snape invented! I imagine Snape was pretty possessive of his spells, and would enjoy being the only one who knows how to do them. :p

Yes, applying for jobs... everyone has to face that unpleasant reality sometime haha.

Your priorities for the story sound remarkably similar to Mandy's :p

See, I'm not entirely evil. There could have been snogging and there WAS!

Yeah, a little awkward for Mandy, but they didn't invite any of their other Gryffindor friends either so she's not too upset. (See, Carol isn't even there. Lol)

I'm glad you liked New Years! Yay, fluff and cuddling and a girl chat! I'm happy that you're happy about the happy relationship chapter hehe.

Yep full moon... they don't know at this point that that is a stupid idea O_o

Thanks so much for your lovely review!



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