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Review:toomanycurls says:
Hello!! I was about right with the "several hours later" projection, haha. My dad visited today so I'm just now sitting down to my computer.

I was quite taken with Devlin's hatred and mistrust of Harry and Alexandra. His ability to sense the emotions at play was quite intersting. It really showed how much he learned to manipulate people while he was with Voldemort. I really liked how his equated being Devlin with a dream he had. I could see how brainwashing would cause that. Oh gosh, when Remus walked in and Geoffrey and Devlin reacted so violently, I was at the edge of my seat! I'm eager to see the reason Remus bit him (and why Harry's cool with it). I'm sure there had to be something weird going on for lycanthropy being the better option.

Sirius was quite believable in this chapter. He would be quite unhappy with someone who both threatened Remus and was involved in keeping Devlin with Voldemort. Geoffrey's passionate defense of Devlin was quite heart warming. I know he's on the wrong side but I do like him.

I'm not surprised that Devlin is planning to escape whenever/however possible - it's so tragic!

-Rose

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