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Review:Red_headed_juliet says:
Woah! Your authors note just blew my mind. Yes, of course the hints are there, now that I think about it... "unisex jumper" and what not, but I just assumed... ha. Now I feel like I should go back and read it, thinking about Thackery as a girl. I actually thought maybe Thackery had been born a girl, and was trying to be thought of as a boy, but it never occured to me you hadn't specified Thackery as a he or she. What a good idea!

Anyways, still a lovely story! This chapter is just as good as the last. It was nice to meet the parents, and hear of Ireland. (I'm in the USA, and love the descriptions of England and Ireland in general. +] ) Like I said before, characterization is perfect. The flow is wonderful, great readability, especially for it being in first person. Sometimes first person can be jarring, but you've done very well. Not lacking in description at all. You make everything very clear to the reader

There was a typo, but I can't remember where, and I can only remember one, so a far lot of good that is as far as CC. lol. Everyone has typos.

On to the next chapter! Eventually! As my little one just woke up. But really, I can't wait for the opportunity.

Author's Response: Hi again! :D

Ah, yay! :) I was wondering if people would be surprised or not. It's really cool that you were actually wondering about whether Thackeray was identifying with another gender. It's been so interesting seeing if people assumed boy or girl.

I'm glad you liked it! I'm Canadian and therefore rather in love with England and Ireland as well, so this was quite fun to write. :) It's great to know you liked the characters and the first person - I really liked writing Rox and sort of miss her a little already. I'm so pleased you liked the description as well.

Ah, I'm going to go typo-hunting soon! :P

Thanks so much for the brilliant review! :) I really appreciate you coming back to leave your thoughts on the chapter! ♥


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