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Review:Red_headed_juliet says:
I'm going to like this story. You've done a brilliant job. The first paragraph, even the story summary, left me wanting to know more. I can tell that you've really fleshed out these characters as much as you possibly can. It's just the right amount of silly and amusing mixed in with foreshadowing. I'm looking forward to see how it progresses, though I don't have time to read more now.

I didn't find anything to comment on as far as CC, so good job! Normally I'll find something, but you've done an absolutely perfect job.

I liked the bit about unicorn poop drawing and how it was quickly shut down. lol. And then dropping stones to try and get a mermaid to complain. Very nice. I'm not sure Thackery knows what he's getting into. There's no way they're going to bury Dumbledore. No way... not unless he has some serious powers of persuasion.

All in all, this is a very, very interesting story, and I'm glad that I took the time to read it. Again, great characterization. They feel completely real, not flat at all.

I'm glad we did this swap! Until next time!

Author's Response: Hi! First of all, thanks so much for leaving me reviews on the whole story. I really appreciate it and loved hearing your thoughts! :D

It's amazing to hear you were intrigued right off the bat. Depth mixed with silly was just what I wanted - it's definitely one of the sillier stories I've written.

Haha, I imagine the professors would be quite annoyed with the unicorn poo thing. :P Thackeray has no idea what they're doing, really, other than causing a bit of a stir by coming up with ridiculous schemes.

I'm so glad you liked the story and the characters! I loved writing it and felt like it was quite challenging, so getting this amazing feedback really means a lot. Thanks so much! :D

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