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Review:toomanycurls says:
*runs and jumps into the fluff* whoo! it's like snow!

I have a migraine so this may not make sense.

I'm really really glad they got a chapter to be happy together with so many cute moments and so much snogging. It kind of sucked that people like Vanessa were trying to sabatouge things but then I was thrilled that Sirius trusted Melanie enough to not even give Vanessa's words a second thought!! No unnecessary drama!!!

Ooh! I like the idea of Mel going for the DoM! Mainly because it's such an interesting sounding place to work.

I LOVED their picnic and their late night flying. Sirius is a bit reckless but he makes up for it with his cute.

I feel bad for Remus and his furry little problem and it's hysterical that people really bought the rabbit explanation. UGH! I want to shake him by the collar and tell him to just accept that people will try to love him in the carnal way and that it's okay! (totally hypocritcal for me to say that as I wrote him doing the same thing)

...why is Charlotte giving off more "future DE" vibes? :(

You did a great job showing how, while Mel is part of the crowd and dating one of the Marauders, they're not going to share their deepest secrets with her either. I think that's rather realistic.

Each chapter that they're happy makes me nervous that something horrible will happen between them and pull the two apart. o.o

Awesome chapter!!


Author's Response: Aw :( Well, I hear that fluff is a great medication for migraines, so lucky you! :p

Yay! I'm so glad you liked the fluffiness of this chapter! It's been a while getting to this point so they deserved some happy and drama-free time :)

I always thought the DoM sounded like the coolest place ever. (It sounds like the wizard equivalent of the Stargate program hahaha)

Poor Remus, someone needs to knock some sense into him. The rabbit haha... I guess if you say anything in an authoritative enough tone, people will believe you. Stranger things have happened at Hogwarts, I'm sure.

I'm glad you liked that and found her new relationship realistic.

Charlotte... well, she's not an open book, is she. Only time will tell. Muahaha.

Something horrible? Am I that evil? ... actually don't answer that

Thanks for your wonderful review! Feel better :)

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