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Review:toomanycurls says:
Hello!!

love love love love, this chapter and how you ended the story!

At first I was a bit unsure of Leticia - I thought she might be trying to hit on Thackeray with her good looks and nice questions. I did like that they got interviewed for their cause. I got a good grin at their list of objectives for the project.

Aw! I do like that Harry supported them, at least in his quote. I could have seen him not wanting Dumbledore's remains to be disturbed but I like that he was okay with it.

I thought you segwayed into gender in a clever way. Of course Thackeray has rather developed thoughts and insight on the topic. I'm glad that the concept was rather new to Roxanne though. It felt like she genuinely tossed the idea around until she understood it in her own way rather than just taking the text book definitions.

I really like how Thackeray helped James and Jameson. I think it's heartening that McGonagall was so supportive of them and making the school emotionally safe for all students.

When Roxanne gets out her thoughts on Thackeray's gender not mattering because she loved her as a person not as a specific gender it was just amazing. As I mentioned above, I like that Rox came to understand this issue/idea in her own way. It made her thoughts and realization so much more powerful.

I loved reading the fast forward to current day. I might steal NMO as a term - I don't know if I would have been cool enough to say anything other than NGO. You did such a wonderful job with this story and told a beautiful love story which really captured the meaning behind having a modern romance.

-Rose

Author's Response: Hola! :)

Yay! I'm so glad you liked this story - I felt it was quite different from what I've written in the past so getting a positive reaction is really incredible.

I think Leticia was flirting with Thackeray a little - at least in Roxanne's suspicious girlfriend head. Hehe, I'm glad you liked it! I thought the whole thing was a bit of a half-serious, half-ridiculous idea so it felt right to have some humour.

Yes, I imagined Harry being supportive of Rox! Even if he might have just said anything to get the press off his back - he'd be quite sick of being in the paper by this point I'd imagine!

I'm so glad to hear you liked how gender was portrayed! Haha, of course Thackeray would know, as not only is it relevant but Thackeray likes to know everything. :P You hit Roxy right on the head there: she likes to understand and approach things in her own way.

I'm pleased you liked how Thackeray was there for James, and how supportive McGonagall was. I feel she would do everything she could to help students feel safe.

I'm so happy you liked that! I actually felt a little emotional writing it, haha. :) It's amazing to hear you found it interesting and powerful.

You can definitely steal it! :P I can't imagine Thackeray doing anything other than getting involved in social issues.

Thanks so much for the beautiful review! :D This story is so special to me so getting all your amazing feedback really made my day! ♥


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