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Review:Lululuna says:
Oh. My. Merlin. You are just killing me with the suspense in this chapter. I was honestly holding my breath the whole time and terrified about what was going to happen.

First of all, I cannot believe Remus. I really have no idea what is up with him - perhaps he's under the Imperius curse? I don't know! - but hopefully he has a good excuse or he will really be in my bad books. It's possible that he's cooperating to protect Tonks or Harry or Sirius, but it really doesn't feel that way.

I wonder if the one impersonating Moody was Barty Crouch? I guess there are a lot of impersonations going on, but that would be a funny parallel. :P

I liked how much Sirius' thought process adjusts when he turns into Padfoot. It's quite cool, how he suddenly starts thinking like a dog, and how he "likes" Marlene and waves his tail when he sees a wand, and thinks of Harry as a puppy. :P It's very cute, even in a battle.

Poor Florence. :( That's so sad! But I did enjoy the bantering that she and Tonks had, and how she was brave in the end and tried to save Tonks. I also really love the way you write Tonks' morphing abilities, like how she can grow eyes in the back of her head and get rid of her tearducts. It's quite brilliant to see how she uses it to her advantage.

I hope everybody's alright, and that we find out what's happening soon! :D Counting down the days until next Sunday. :)

Author's Response: I'm sorry! :P

He has his reasons, but no, no Imperius Curse; he's just doing what he thinks is right... :S

Haha, it would be a funny parallel, but it's not him, I'm afraid. :P

It does change, but it was also the effects of the Confundus Charm that made him seem a bit silly. :P

I know. :( I had fun writing the banter, and I think she definitely redeemed herself in Tonks' eyes before the Serpent Sworn got her. :( Thank you! Tonks is such an interesting character, even more so because of her abilities. :) It's so much fun coming up with ways for her to look/change herself. :P

You'll find out soon enough; things should resolve themselves in the next chapter. :P

Thank you so much for the review!

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