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Review:Karou_Marauder says:
Hi there!
This is such a touching story... I know others have said it but the love between the three of them is so huge and unbreakable. You get the feeling that Harry would do anything for his son. (I'm sure Ginny would too but she's not in it as much as Harry.) I really like the bit at the start with "another one of those 'big' life discussions". You've got Ron just right with all his, um, Ron-comments. All your characters are excellent. One small CC - the scene with the Chocolate Frog Card-guy is slightly confusing.
Great story! (10/10)

Author's Response: Hi, yourself!

I'm really glad that you found it touching. I wrote this for a challenge, and the person I gifted it to had been mired in a long stretch of writing Ginny and Harry on the outs from one another in her own story. It was nice to be able to gift her a moment of pure happiness for the two of them.

Truthfully, I'm not completely unhappy about your reaction to that scene. It's meant to be chaotic and possibly a little confusing.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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