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Review:AlexFan says:
I knew that Albus wasn't exactly sane and everything but he has really lost his mind this time. You gave the idea that he was capable of murder throughout this entire story, and I never doubted that Albus would kill someone, I just never thought it would actually happen. I think even he has come to realize that he himself has gone a little (a lot) mad. The way that he just killed those men though was scary, it was in cold blood and he didn't even care about what he had done.

And the way that he wanted to punish Rose for the fact that she was just being a regular teenage girl. I felt a little bad for her because of everything that Albus was putting her through and how cruel he was being. I don't know how Rose put up with his cruelty, it's like she just kept ignoring it over and over. I know that people have unhealthy relationships with their family but this is by far the unhealthiest one that I've come across.

Things are really going downhill with every chapter of this story. The only normal lives being led here are by Rose and Hugo and Rose is going to start brewing illegal potions in her old home.

I would say that I hope that Albus gets help in he future of this story but I doubt that's going to happen seeing as he would rather go down fighting trying not to get help than actually receive help.

Author's Response: In his defense, the men were attacking to kill him--he just managed to get there first. But you are right about it being in cold blood--he did seem like he was enjoying himself didn't he?

Though he does go into panic-mode shortly afterwards.

Albus is a bit possessive and very cruel in that flashback, because he doesn't really understand why he's so mad at her in the first place. Rose does though, because he's jealous, and she tries to get through to him a little...

Albus IS a jerk but I think Rose returns the treatment when she can. Obviously not when they're running for their lives though haha.

This story is really lacking in healthy relationships unfortunately.

Things go downhill every chapter ;)

Oh you never know, I have a lot of surprises in store for Albus (especially next chapter). Stay tuned and thanks for the lovely review!

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