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Review:Pixileanin says:
I liked the tone you began this chapter with. Regulus sounds like a little boy here, the way that he refers to his "favorite person in the world" and how he describes each of his relatives by the size of their nose, or how his cousin's mean tricks got to him. And of course the presents. All kids like those!

Even Regulus' choice of ice cream shows how much he wants to be like his big brother. This made me a little sad, knowing what his fate will be in the future. It also makes me a little sick, knowing that Regulus really wanted to show his parents the mark, and on Christmas too! But then they weren't even there. It saddened me even more.

And the letter is very curious indeed. I bet it was meant to say something more, but it probably isn't safe to do that. I felt Regulus' yearning for his brother right there, the way he was torn between his family and his brother.

This chapter flowed smoothly. I wonder why Regulus' parents had to be out on that day, and why Sirius contacted him too. Did Sirius know that his parents would be out? Did Sirius hear about the mark? Questions, questions...

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