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Hi there!

I really loved your plot! Not many authors around here try to right more about the time when Remus and Tonks hadn't met, so I found this very original and nice. I thought you captured the tension and all the emotions in her mind really well and your Tonks was highly believable. :)

I also love that Charlie and Tonks were best friends! That sort of explains why Molly knew Tonks so well and why she was trying to get Bill fall for her. That must have been because she knew Tonks for years and was sure Tonks was a nice person. And they have so much in common! Like the love for adventure and thrill.

I thought you wrote the Ministry part really well. I particularly enjoyed the conversation she had with that small girl. It was just so. nice.

The ending was hilarious and perfect. Haha, I just loved it! :)

Great job! Enjoyed reading this very much. :)

Ashwini

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for stopping by!

I'm really glad Tonks was believable and that you liked reading about her friendship with Charlie. I like how you connected Molly's trust of Tonks with her friendship with Charlie. That's a nice thought :)

Thanks for your kind review!

-Amanda


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