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Review:ReeBee says:
Hi Amanda!! :D Review swap!

This was super amazing! The characterisation was quite clear! I loved how u made it clear without just stating it :) Great job! I think I'm really going to like Ginny in this! :D But, I'm one of those people who like Ginny, so yeah :)

Okay, the description was quite good too! Loved how smooth it made the flow :) And then there was a sense of normal, everyday life, which I'm pretty sure was intentional. And loved the scene with Tom Riddle! :D So so interesting and curious! Would have loved to see a bit more description in that scene though, it seemed a bit fast compared to the other parts of the story.

The plot seems so interesting! LOVE IT! Really good! It was really creative and I cant wait to see what u do with it! :D

Great job! I think this is such an amazing beginning! :D Cant wait to read more! :D

-ReeBee :)

Author's Response: Hey there, thanks for the swap!

Glad you liked Ginny's characterization, the mundane feel of the piece, and the description!

As for the Tom Riddle scene, I meant for that to be a bit fast-paced in keeping with Ginny's anxiety and so I don't know that putting a lot more description in would work there. Glad it held your attention, though!

Hope you do come back for more later :)

Thanks so much for your kind review!

-Amanda


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