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Review:toomanycurls says:

Doing our review swap! I can't believe I haven't reviewed this yet! I love Tonks. ^_^

I really like the apprenticeship aspect of her Auror training. I can imagine how stressful it must have been to complete her training and then wait months for a job offer. I thought having her struggle with imposter syndrome was very realistic and relatable. I've always thought that Charlie and Tonks would have been friends and I like that you have that too!! Her struggle to control her appearance and the hair color being a nervous tick was really interesting to me also. I've seen other people do that but I like how you did it better (I think others have it as a mood ring almost which gets to me).

Watching Tonks interact with the little girl was heart warming. It felt as if Tonks gained a bit of confidence once she reassured Arielle. Having Tonks be good with children felt just perfect for her too. She would have been a really good mom.

This is a really nice one-shot. You've covered so much of Tonks' personality and quirks. I thought her first day stress was completely relatable.


Author's Response: Hey there, thanks for the swap!

I'm happy that Tonks felt so realistic and that you could identify with her feelings. I agree that in the past I've seen her Metamorphagus traits being treated as more of a "mood ring effect" and I'm glad you like my treatment of it better.

I do think she would have been a good mom :( And a real natural with children. I thought she would want to do what she could to help soothe the little girl's fears given that she's a really good person at heart.

Thanks for your kind review!


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