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Review:LittleLionGirl says:
Wow. I was trying to find any neglected one-shots and I now see why it was so hard to!

I enjoy the fact you had Draco acknowledge his life was quite easy. Most of the time I just find whining and it makes my eyes ache to read. The challenge task was a little- odd. However you did a smashing job of writing it! I understand the whole jinxing Potter thing- because Harry always got just as defensive when someone talked about his father.

The whole idea of Draco being teased is just hilarious because that is something you'd never imagine- much less from ickle first years. The whole Pansy characterization really was spot on. I think he really was running from her- not the munchkins lol. I enjoyed watching how the different teachers reacted to the event. And Moody's badgering(or ferreting perhaps?) was written. It was like he was equal to how Snape treats Harry. Hagrid's reaction was by far the best. All and all? Job well done!

XOXOXOXOX,
LLG

Author's Response: Thanks for the swap!

I'm happy you felt like Draco's characterization was realistic and that he got his just desserts in this one-shot :) I agree that Moody's characterization comes off as kind of mirroring how Snape treated Harry, which is kind of funny to think about.

It's tough for me to write humor but I'm still pretty proud of this attempt. Glad you felt like it was executed well and provided a good response to the challenge prompt :)

Thanks again for your sweet review!

-Amanda


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