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Review:academica says:
Hey, here for our review swap :)

I liked the interaction between Albus and Rose. It is curious to me that Scorpius was so quick to bring up the idea of dating her--it was almost like he just saw her and was like, "Hmm, she's a girl. Okay." I would think he'd be a bit choosier in the girl he has to force himself to spend time with; then again, maybe all girls are the same to him since he isn't actually attracted to them. Poor Albus, though. He tried so hard to keep Scorpius but it just wasn't in the cards :(

Augh, what a sad ending to this chapter! I love how relatable your characters' emotions are; it makes it hard for me to choose a side because I think both Albus and Scorpius are suffering and even poor Rose is being played as a fool here. I'm not sure quite what to expect next from this story--will Albus fight for the love of his life? Will Scorpius begin to truly fall for Rose? And given the mention of Cindy--will Albus give dating a girl a try, too? So many questions...

One thing that was missing here that I would have liked to see was Draco and Astoria's reactions to Scorpius dating Rose. I would think it would be a "lesser of two evils" situation, and Draco may not have anticipated his son going after Hermione Granger's daughter. Maybe that's next chapter.

Nice work! Thanks for the swap :)

-Amanda

Author's Response: Hi Amanda!

Uh, well, I do think it was pretty much what you said. He saw a girl that he knows a bit through Albus and went with his first available option. :-/ I don't think he stopped to really consider if she was someone he'd be really happy wtih or how it would impact Albus. Let's face it, he never stops to consider Albus.

I'm glad it wasn't easy to pick sides. I really didn't want to make any of the unredeemable (which I think Scorpius is teetering on the verge of). Cindy will stay just friends but the rest of it will come out in the wash. :D

Draco and Astoria do get more airtime next chapter - and you'll get treated to their lovely reactions to Scorpius' dating choices.

Thank you so much for such a lovley review!! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far.

-Rose


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