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Review:academica says:
Hey Courtney, here for Review Tag!

Fun fact - I did not know they had Pop-Tarts in England. But there you go! :)

I like your characterization of the family, particularly Dani, Kat and Bran. They seem very realistic in how they argue back and forth and get on each other's nerves. I liked how the action didn't feel over the top or too dramatic. It had a nice, very "everyday" feel to it.

I also liked how you tied this scene kind of effortlessly into the main series, what with the mention of Harry and the inclusion of Oliver. We don't hear a whole lot about that particular class of students (their year, I mean) and it's cool that you decided to focus your story on them.

I did notice a couple of places where you either forgot punctuation or used the wrong kind, but nothing too noticeable or detrimental to the flow.

Nice work!

-Amanda

Author's Response: Hey there!

I believe they do have Pop-Tarts in England, although they are a lot more expensive than in the US, haha.

We know three characters from that particularly year, and I really wanted to write a story which included them all, especially because Oliver and Percy are two of my favourite characters!

Thanks for the review!

Courtney:)


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