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Review:academica says:
Hey Marina, here for Review Tag :)

Wow, this is an interesting plot idea! I hope you didn't experience anything like this on your travels :) Just kidding. I'm curious to find out more about Robin and how Teddy and Victoire got themselves into this situation. I want to believe that somehow Teddy will survive his injury, but I'm doubtful of that, unfortunately :( Oh, and I wonder who the man that betrayed them is?

I really liked the imagery you used in this chapter. Obviously description is important in a story about faraway places, especially if you've been there and many of your readers haven't. This line, and the whole paragraph it came from, was particularly effective: Sunburn arrived in cycles when the nearest available cream was perched on a shop shelf some fifty miles away. You did a great job of summing up the harsh realities of Africa in just a few lines.

Great job, and I hope to return sometime soon.


Author's Response: Ah wow, thank you Amanda! Rest easy, I did not experience anything nearly so traumatic! Thank goodness ;)

I'm glad you liked the description. It's hard trying to really capture the reality of somewhere I've been but others may not have and I really wanted it to translate well in writing.

Thank you so much!

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