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Review:toomanycurls says:
So!!! Happy 500! *confetti made from gold stars* *fireworks*

Just to be sure, you're getting a few just in case someone goes all Paul Bunyan their stories.

*this* is a fluffy interaction between Remus and Grace. I like that he's all complimentory about her social skills improving and that he said he might reconsider her belly rubbing offer. :D

Remus is a very good teaser - with his "this is just a thought - she might want to be friends with you" I just laughed and laughed until my husband asked who I made cry.

I do love that she's all tongue tied about Tonks. I want you to write in Remus/Tonks for this story explaining his thoughts when he remembers grace telling him about pink haired girls! DO IT!!

spunky bunny? *dies laughing*

*zombie rose here*

I don't like Mary either! But I like her brainzzz

Grace's jealousy is adorable as is Remus' realizaton that she's jealous.

I LOVE the distinction between being in love and being soul mates. It seems so profound.

...doesn't Grace understand that not every relationship needs to be with your soulmate?!?!! I should give her lessons on this.

um, wow, it just got very warm where I am.

THEY KISSED! IT WAS WONDERFUL! DO IT AGAIN!


Whoo! For going home for the holidays! boo to talking about grades...

I like that Remus is going for the Carpe Diem approach to snogging Grace. she should lighten up. *grumbles*

Grace plays the Ace (lily* card like a pro with Snape! You really captured him wonderfully here. wow, Regulus is kind of a jerkwad here.

oh hai - it is warm where they are but I like the warmth.

Is Grace's attitude here my punishment for Remus being like he is in Epitaph/HIMKL? I'm going to just lock them in a closet again and not let them out. And poor Remus thinks she's ashamed of being with him!! and Remus want's to be with her! :( :(

and he knows her Cruor language AND WHAT IS THE INTERVENTION FOR!??!

Amazing chapter! I need a drink now.

-Rose

Author's Response: Whoo! Happy 500th! *Fanfare and whathaveyou* And awe!!! For me? Yay!

Ahh...proper fluff. I'm slowly, kind of, figuring it out :). Remus is a perfect character to practice fluff with!

I'm sorry for making you cry from laughing :D, it's a common ailment that I, myself, suffer from -- laughing until I cry. Remus gets cheeky sometimes ;).

At risk of some spoilers, I have to focus pieces of later chapters on characters other than Grace in order to tie in some of the events of the Second Wizarding War. I've figured I would use Remus for some of those pieces, and reflecting on meeting Tonks and what Grace has said isn't a bad idea. :D

Spunky bunny :p. Oh, hello zombie Rose!

I hadn't planned on poor Mary's character to be so...abrasively teenage girl. She suits my needs, though :D. Oh well, Mary doesn't need to be liked; she just has to flirt with Remus and make Grace twitchy.

The difference between being in love and being soul mates makes for some challenging character relationship developments -- but, hey, Snape isn't very loving :D. It gives me a headache really, but that's okay! Challenge is my middle name. Rumpel Challenge GummyQueen-- it's what they call me *cough* ;p. Just don't ask who *they* are. Wait, what were we talking about? Oh, yeah, love and soulmates. On the cosmic plane...well, it's complicated.

Grace doesn't understand as much of this as she thinks she does ;).

Warm is nice-- kisses!

Dumbledore playing the father role... -_- Grace will have to do better in school.

Poor Remus is forced to sneak around in closets. Well, at least they *are* kissing...for now ;).

Hooray for warm! It was weird writing a snogging scene, I kind of felt like I was invading their privacy...until I remembered that they don't have any privacy because I am their Rowling...muahahaha.

:D No, its a bumpy road in trying to establish a mature friendship between Remus and Grace that doesn't involve the snogging *hides*. Remus does want to be with her :(. Bumpy roads.

That will come into use later ;). Intervention! Heheh.

O.o Sorry! :D

-Rumpel


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