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Review:toomanycurls says:
I read this at work today and couldn't stop grinning. :D :D :D

I want to prod Lexi at the beginning because she's avoiding sirius while he's all sick and in the hospital. I get her reasoning - no one wants to be played by a player. but, :( Sirius really likes her and she's not just a bet!!!

Having Lexi be friends with Regulus is brilliant (I think I've said that before). I can see that it really burns at Sirius to see Lexi friendly with his brother (even if it's regular friendly and not pervy friendly). I wanted to slap Lexi (you really get my emotions going) when she was about to walk out but then she opened up. I laughed when Sirius asked if she was scared of spiders and said he'd take care of that for her. I love his nurturing/caring side. Oh Sirius is just so perfect through that conversation! He doesn't get defensive and doesn't let his huge ego get in the way.

It was the "I think I'm falling in love with you line" that made me go all gaga. I thought it was delivered flawlessless and Lexi's response was just to die for. haha, then Sirius got his wand in a knot talking about Regulus. *sigh* THERE COULD HAVE BEEN SNOGGING!

Of course one of her friends was a row over. :P Oh well, at least she doesn't have to think of a way to tell them.

oh no! Charlie and Carter! Oh yes... I hope this makes room for Remus/Charlie. :D So, Charlie is falling for Carter and he's not loving' her back? I'm glad they've stuck together too.

...James went to Ravelclaw CR to talk to Kendra to talk about Lily when Lily was really there? o.o that's a lot. I don't think James could have said anything bad about Lily's freckles! I'm sure he loves them and thinks they're adorable! Oh poor Lily. I also laughed when everyone was throwing in their suggestions for what Lexi does best.

Okay, now I'm mad at James. He can't blame her time of the month. Whoo! Punching!

I'm going to hope that, for your sake (:P), Sirius isn't behind the attack on Prof. McLaren.

Awesome chapter!!

-Rose

Author's Response: Hi Rose!

Yay for grinning! Yes, prod Lexi! Sirius doesn't deserve her avoidance! I know she's not just a bet, but does she?!

Oh I just love Lexi and Regulus's friendship! I think I wrote that just to get on Sirius's nerves. :P And yes, maybe slapping was deserved, although I'm glad she stayed as well! And Sirius was just such a doll, wasn't he?

Ugh, I loved that line! And then there's Lexi. *shakes head* Goodness, what am I going to do with her? And then Sirius goes and mucks up the romantic moment. They're made for each other, I'm telling you.

And yup! There's Charlie! I'm slightly concerned over your priorities right now, what with being happy that Charlie and Carter broke up, although you are definitely right: more room for Charlie/Remus! :D

And then there's James. That boy. To be honest, Lily was just having a bad day, so James saying something about her freckles set her off, although I do agree, punching was definitely encouraged in that scenario!

And I'll tell you now, Sirius isn't behind it, but that doesn't mean he doesn't know anything about it. o.0

Thank you so much for such an awesome review Rose!
Lo:)


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