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Review:The Empress says:
Hello! I popped over from TGS to browse your page. Congratulations on being featured!
This story caught my eye because of Richard on your banner ♥

It is MAGNIFICENT.
At first it took me a bit to figure out the change in points of view, but I'm a bit slow ;) Once I realized, I could immediately hear their voices in my head and WOW. I absolutely love this. Everything about it. Truthfully, it stole my breath.

The pick ups from one pov to another, as if they were having the exact same thoughts is just gorgeous. I am in love with this story and this style and everything about it.

You captured the emotion and movement of the scene so beautifully. I could feel their heartbreak and their longing and their loyalty and love. I at once both wanted them to have a happy ending together and also didn't want that because their spouses were so wonderful to them. And they so obviously loved them too.

This line --> enveloping two loves within a single heart has come with a heavy burden. So. Much. Love.

I've read through it twice and I'm gong to read it again because I swear with each reading I'm going to love it more and more.

xoxo
Shiloh

Author's Response: Shiloh! I am so sorry I never responded to this review, but I want to thank you SO much for coming to visit my author page! I was so excited to be featured, and it makes me happy that it brought you over to my neck of the woods :)

This is probably one of the riskier stories I've posted, just because I wasn't sure if the POV changes would work for people. I read a oneshot with some similar elements (I can't remember the name of it right now, but it's a Romione by TenthWeasleyWriter, who is wonderful), and I wanted to try my hand at the back-and-forth style. I had never seen a whole story written this way before, and I hoped it wouldn't be too weird. I'm so glad you ended up enjoying it, though! I'm pretty proud of how it turned out :)

Your reaction to their conflict is exactly what I had in mind :) I wanted to show how difficult it was for them to be fully happy with what they have when there's always that "what if" lurking in the back of their minds. I'm so happy that it spoke to you, and that you enjoyed reading it.

This review makes me so happy! I just don't even know what to say, really. I'm so flattered that you liked this! Thank you so much for your kind words and wonderful encouragement. I appreciate it so much! :)

--Maggie


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