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Review:KiwiOliver says:
I can't believe I didn't click when reading the first chapter, but when you were describing what it's like in Cairo I was reminded of when I was a British kid living in the middle east. Sunburn every day. (:

You describe the whole place really well from the deserted daytimes to the crowded markets. One would think you'd been there yourself, or at least done a lot of research!

I definitely smiled at the Weasley complexion bit, and I also liked the bit with the pushy salesman. I know that al too well from my time abroad.

I really like the way this story is written and I'm looking forward to reading on and finding out what will happen to Rose and Scorpius!
(Oh and I like how Scorp's mother is super protective and made him get a phone, it's adorable.)

Anyway I'm adding this to my reading list so I don't forget to come back to it this time! I really like the story so far and can't wait to see where it goes!

Author's Response: Aw, poor you! It must have been fun living there but surburn is just blergh. As for the descriptions of Egypt, it's a mixture of both as I've been to Morocco which is similar so I just did a bit of research and adapted it a little. :)

Haha, you've got to love the pushy salesman, they're just a ton of fun of course :P Aw, I'm so glad that you're excited for Rose and Scorpius as they are very dear to me :P

Thanks for such great comments and a review, and I do hope you continue reading! :D

-Kiana


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