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Review:teh tarik says:
Hello Shiloh! You left me such lovely reviews for my story that I thought I'd stop by your AP and see what you've written!

And wow! This story is amazing! George/Angelina is one of my favourite canon ships, but fics exploring this pairing are quite hard to come by, so yours was an absolute treat to read. The writing is simple but so earnest and beautiful, and I do think your use of second person worked really well here. You really got into George's frame of mind; you captured his initial solitude and loneliness without too much drama or angst, and then you portrayed his budding relationship with Angelina beautifully!

Speaking of Angelina, gahh! I love what you've done with her here. I love her entrance, how she walks into the shop and declares that George will take her out to dinner, her hip leaning against the table (such a lovely detail!). It's a very wonderful relationship portrayal, and I love the imagery of the streetlamps, and how special these are to both George and Angelina.

And awww, that ending! ♥ That was so fluffy, and you ended the fic on the perfect note, reinforcing the streetlamp metaphor, and with George about to propose to Angelina...at least I think that's what he was about to do with the ring box.

I really loved this story; your writing is delicate and your characters are vulnerable but strong at the same time, and just beautifully written. Great work!

-teh

Author's Response: OH MY GOSH ♥
What a magnificent review! Thank you :)

I am sooo glad you like it. I have never written George and Angelina before so I was a bit unsure going into it but now I just adore them. I've never written Angelina much at all and she came to me much easier than I expected.

I actually started writing this in first person and it just wasn't working, so I went back and changed it and BAM! it sounded so much better.

Thank you for this *hug* You're the best.
xoxo
Shiloh


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