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Review:luciusobsessed says:
I love how you started it this story with a witty comment about her name. I can relate to that as well honestly. Alyssa is a strong character and I like how she has a good relationship with her mom and can be so open with her. Her siblings make for interesting characters as well. I really like her sister and how she wants to grow out of that little girl image. I liked the part when she told Albus it was better if they didn't start a conversation after eight years. It was cold and harsh but is great for adding up tension and am excited to see how it will all unfold xoxo luciusobsessed

Author's Response: I was trying my best at something witty/funny, something which is a first for me so I'm glad you like/relate to it. Alyssa really holds her own, I think? it comes across that she's feisty in some aspects as well as being a strong person.

I wanted Alyssa and her mum pretty close with a good relationship, but they do have their moments. I love writing Alyssa with her siblings because she's really close with Ade and Chloe, then Caine is more of a 'bad boy'/annoying brother in a house full of girls and Carrie is a bouncy, happy little girl.

Although younger than Alyssa, Chloe believe she is older than her years and I'm glad you like her! Albus and Alyssa have so much history and although Lyss was harsh, she does warm up to him in the end.

Thank you for the review!

-Potterfan310


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