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Review:toomanycurls says:
Hello!! Doing our review swap!

I love the explanation you give for how quiet Viktor is. It's perfectly paced and gives just the right level of backstory. I could see it being stressful for him to be with someone who chats nonstop. haha, oh Viktor's patience is getting quite thin.

It makes me laugh that she doesn't know she's talking to a famous. Amy does seem a bit obnoxious. shouldn't she be a bit more frightened on the run from her family?

Oh it's so sad that Viktor hasn't had a friend before. He just needs a hug now.

Their running around and running right into her brothers again was quite amusing. I just can't believe she told them Viktor was going to marry her. I mean, she's in love with someone else after all.

Quite an interesting chapter!

-Rose

Author's Response: Hi! It was nice to see you back! :)

I'm so glad you liked the explanation for Viktor's quietness! I always believed his sulky and quiet behavior was related to some incidents happened in his childhood, and that's what I'm writing in this story. It makes me happy to hear you found everything believable and also enjoyed it!

Amy isn't a bit afraid of her brothers, instead she keeps bossing them around. She knows they can be fooled easily and that's what it makes me sad. She doesn't think the same about the parents, but they aren't currently around. :)

Haha, I know it's hard to believe she lied! But she does have a plan on her mind which is revealed in the next chapter. :)

Thanks for the wonderful review, Rose! :D

Ashwini



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