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Review:toomanycurls says:
Review swap!

I'm glad you're switching views in the story. That always gives such a rich narrative! Albus seemed so complex last chapter that I'm eager to get inside his head a little.

Albus' interpretation of Scorpius' reaction was hilarious. I can't blame Albus for not wanting to talk about it in front of others. I like how you describe the Slytherins.

I love the twist that Albus was intrigued by Aaliyah and perhaps fancied her. Or at least he wanted to understand her better.

aw, he's checking her out in class. :D I do like how he's putting it off as an academic/curiosity thing. haha, Scorpius' hobby of making dirty drawing is quite funny.

I wouldn't be very happy if my friend woke me up in the middle of the night to announce he liked someone. Oh poor Scorpius is afraid to like her. :( He just needs a pat on the head.

Is Blaise a Jr? There's a Blaise in Harry's year at Hogwarts so I thought I'd ask. Ooh, Fred and Aaliyah were a thing. Interesting. :D The plot thickens.

Why is Aaliyah yelling for Albus then get all shy when he pays attention to her? That's not like her. OooOoOooh! She changed her mind! That could be exciting! I like her rules! ^_^ I can see how the no snogging wouldn't fly. I mean, they have to be realistic. The others were good though! Al really does have an ego on his shoulders.

I can't tell if Albus is just messing with her or trying to really be her bf and going about it the difficult way.

-Rose

Author's Response: I didn't really plan for this story to be from different points of view but there were some parts I felt necessary to see from Al's pov so now the point of view switches every other chapter.

Slytherins are fun to write. I find that Slytherin is the most interesting house and after that Hufflepuff. And Scorpius is a babe, haha.

He doesn't fancy her but yeah, he does want to understand her better. Yes, he is observing her from afar. Albus is the type that likes to get to know his enemy or person of interest, haha. And Scorpius... he's a... creative one?

Blaine is Blaise's son, yes. And Fred and Aaliyah were a thing though the details come later.

She's not shy that he's paying attention to her really, more about admitting that he's right (that she will change her mind and all). Al does have an ego but for real, his ego isn't that big. He just needs it to be confident.

He's not messing with her but yes, he can be a little difficult. :)

This review was so, so thoughtful. I loved reading it! Thank you!!

~Sama :))


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