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Review:toomanycurls says:

Mel gets a 100 gold stars for finally asking Sirius to go to Hogsmeade with her! And he get 110 gold stars for having them sneak into the village and... and... this made my day. Just imagine the words "love" next to every paragraph in this chapter.

I thought it was funny that Mel was a bit uncertain about going down the tunnel. I'd be too. Ah! It's funny and cute when Mel teases Sirius about holding James, Peter, and Remus' hands (or however that worked) and then he admits they were quite scared on their first trip through the tunnel.

Oh hai with the touching.

Only Sirius would give his date a beverage that brought on singing like that. :P It fits so well though. I just can't get over how comfortable they are together and how well they mesh.

yay! Mel knows about the map. Now she knows their secretive ways (some of them at least).

FINALLY! THERE WAS SNOGGING!! AND WHY DID IT STOP? I did like that it paused then restarted.

I just love how he tells her to sit with him for dinner. Somethng about it is just so... mouthwatering.

Then they leveled with each other about how long they've liked each other! and I almost died from happiness.


Amazing chapter! and about time :P


Author's Response: Hahaha, I've been waiting for you to get to this chapter for that reason :P

Gold stars all around, yay! I'm so glad you liked their date, it was definitely a weird one, but somehow that's appropriate for them. I think since they've known each other so long and it took them so long to get to this point, they're quite comfortable with each other now and can be their ridiculous selves.

yeah had to make up for the lack of snogging in the other chapters haha.

I'm so glad you liked this chapter, and thanks for the awesome review!! :D

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