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Review:toomanycurls says:
Review swap!!

I love the sense of flurry and intensity you start the chapter off with. You talk about fear in such a realistic way. I felt I was experiencing fear as well. Aaliyah's obersvations on the Potter brothers gives a fresh description on the two boys. I find your description of Albus to be quite intriguing actually. Albus seems like such a mystery to me. I really hope he gets unravelled a bit in the story.

You do a wonderful job building and holding tension in a scene. When they hear the high heels coming, the way you describe everyone's reaction, then jump to Albus' unemotional demeanor, and then back to tension is just great.

Charlotte sounds like a force to be reconned with. I wonder what gives her that power or why she's like that. She kind of seems like a bit of a bully when she's trying to get to the bottom of James and Gabby's breakup. I am glad they all pulled together and stood their ground.

Oooh, how scandalous that James and Gabby only pretened to be together to make Charlotte off everyone's case. Even more scandalous that Albus would ask Aaliyah to be his pretend gf. I think there's more to his answer than guilt and snogging.

This is quite a good intro!

-Rose

Author's Response: Hello!!

Description was probably the one thing I was worried most about so I'm really, really happy that you though it was good. The Potter boys are kind of similar in looks but in personality they are quite the opposite. And Al will unravel throughout the story, I promise.

Charlotte is a bit if a twisted character but she does have feelings and all. And there is more to why Al asked Aaliyah to be his gf.

Thank you for the terrific review. You're amazing.
~Sama


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