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Review:ReeBee says:
Hi! Review swap! This was awesome!!! :D :D So so interesting!

Firstly, characterisation! I love strong characters and that's exactly what Aaliyah is! :D Loving her dialogue! Albus, ooh, you've written him really well! :D So so endearing! And James, I'm a sucker for James II and eep! You've made me like him even more! So cute! Loving him! And James/Gabby seem like such a cute couple! Even if they weren't legit...

Plot was amazing as well! It's soo creative! How on earth did u think of it? Eep! The 'golden couple' to protect others from an evil reporter type person is awesome! My mind is still wondering where u came up with it! Please share your creativity! :D :D

Description was good too! It controlled flow really well! :D I would have loved to see a tiny bit more setting description? Other than that, it was awesome!

Grammar/Syntax: There were a couple of instances where you used 'than' instead of 'then'. And Maybe including the MC's actual name more? Because it was mentioned only a few times :)

Great job! Loved it! Cant wait to read more! :D

-ReeBee :)

Author's Response: I love strong characters too! I think that is why I made Aaliyah more of a smart, stubborn yet strong-headed girl. Hehe, Albus! He's a darling, isn't he? Well, a cunning darling. James II is the best and I'm so glad you like how I characterized him. It means so much! James/Gabby have their moments.

Aww, I'm creative? Nah, but it's great that you think so. The plot just came to me but I'm pretty sure there are some stories here based on the same concept. I don't have much creativity to share in the first place but once I get some I'll give some to you, haha.

I know, setting is a bugger. I think why I put less is because I'm not very good at identifying what is too much description and too less lol. But I will keep that in mind.

And I'll go look back at the chapter. I probably ended up missing some mistakes.

Thanks so much!!
You are so positive and thank you for taking the time to leave this! *hugs*

~Sama :D

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