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Review:LaLaLuna says:
I was going into this chapter thinking that I had to actually give some critique, not just ramble on and on about how wonderful your writing is. But then I read the chapter. Your voice is so powerful. Strong, forceful, descriptive, concise. I felt that the conversation between Scorpius and McGonagall was really well written, and the emotion between Rose and Scorpius at the end was extremely powerful. One small comment though: if Scorpius had injured his arm badly, how was he able to take off his shirt? I wouldn't think that he would be able to lift his arm well enough without hurting himself, but that's just me. Otherwise, though, this story is completely incredible. You mix vivid description with realistic dialogue evenly and the emotion is incredible. Love, love, love!

Author's Response: OH MY GOSH, you reviewed all my chapters! How amazing are you?! I wish I could kiss you right now!!
Thank you SO MUCH for your lovely compliments! They seriously make writing this story a pleasure. I don't know if I deserve all of them, but they sure do a good job inflating my ego...! (Which is a good thing ... I think :P)
Also, thanks for pointing out that snag. I'm sure a shoulder injury would've impaired his ability to take off his shirt ... however, Rose couldn't heal it from the outside, since the bruise was forming on the surface of his skin. I definitely should've made that transition smoother, though; it was unrealistic to have him casually take it off as though the wound were nothing.
GAH words cannot describe how much I love your reviews. And you. Stay awesome and keep reading!

- CandiFloss

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