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Review:maraudertimes says:
Ooh! This is interesting!

I'm wondering if this girl is in Slytherin, and if so, who exactly her parentage is. I wonder because she obviously knows Crabbe and Draco, and playing Wizard's Chess with a member of another house doesn't seem very... Slytherin-esque. So that's why I think she's in Slytherin!

But then, how is she not 'pure'? So many questions, so little time. I want answers!

Anyways, I'm excited to find out who this girl is, because I don't remember anyone from Harry's year whose last name is Blanc, so I'm excited to see how you integrate her into the HP canon-verse.

"The Holy Grail," well that's original... WHAT IS IT? What did she tell them? I want answers now!

In others news, I really liked how you used description to set the different scenes, and how the narrator was feeling. It was very well written and I commend you on that! :)

Great job, this is a very good start and I think you have the premise and talent to take this really far!

Author's Response: Hi there!

Thanks for agreeing to do the review swap! I';; get writing yours :)

I'm so so glad that you like this because I did have my reservations writing something a little bit too unorthodox, I mean the holy grail may not fit into HP entirely, but I'll try :P

I hope all the further chapters answer all your questions! And trust me, the Holy Grail is complicated in the context of LKTL but I did try to make it as simple as possible.

Thank for the lovely review :)

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