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Review:evil little devil says:
Well my questions about Ginny knowing are now answered. I did have a feeling that she would have known - it explains why Albus felt distant from both his parents, betrayed by both of them - it intensifies his bitterness.
I love the little Scorose moments you throw in. They are rather adorable. And this story really needs just those few, fleeting moments of light-heartedness in order to make all the bleakness bearable.
You make me feel so sorry for Albus. Kicked out by his own mother for something that can't be proven (and was not directly his fault), even though she knows perfectly well what led to him being the way that he is. I feel like she banished him more to try and get rid of her own guilt than anything else, even though all it will do is intensify it.

Author's Response: Albus had a pretty complicated childhood and we'll explore more of it further on. I'm intentionally keeping Harry-related story in the dark---but you can see that those closest to him i.e. Ginny, while weren't entirely aware of what was going on, did have a faint idea something was iffy.

Glad you like the scorose moments. They are incredibly hard to write tbh, but I'm glad they elevate the mood. Rose could do with a bit of levity.sometimes. I guess. Before I throw her to the sharks again haha.

Hmm it's interesting that you pity Albus and find that he's been wronged. but then he wasn't intentionally trying to kill a unicorn and get Hogwarts shut down. Mistakes were made, but someone had to pay. Karma's a real b* sometimes.

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