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Review:evil little devil says:
This chapter was a bit slower paced than the others, but it felt like a very necessary chapter to have. I feel like this was the precipice chapter for Albus - he could have turned back to save the school, but he didn't, and so now his path is set onto an even darker road than it already was. The scene with Daphne was bone chilling. The lengths to which he is willing to go is quite terrifying. He became even darker this chapter, less human. Without the humanity of Rose to counterbalance his lack of humanity, it was kind of unpleasant to read - though in a good way, if that makes any sense at all.

Author's Response: Oh yes, Albus is just getting darker and darker isn't he? I would like to point out that he did have a fair bit of internal conflict -- thought managed to repress that part of him. Ultimately (for him), surviving is more important than doing the right thing.

It's interesting that Albus is kind of seen as the antithesis of Rose, human and inhumane, its funny to me because I never intended that contrast. I do agree though that Rose is more of a grounding presence.

It was unpleasant to write too, but in a good way haha. Tbh, I had a lot of fun with this chapter--pumped up the horror level to 10 and went crazy with description.

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