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Review:evil little devil says:
This bit is really beautiful:

"She gave him a sad smile. A haunted one. The hollow one of a skeleton whose organs had been removed, whose marrow had been emptied, and who, without connective tissue, seemed only to be held together by chance. Luck. Fate. Curse. Whatever you want to call it. A permanent ticking seemed to resonate from her dulled eyes."

So beautiful and haunting. And not just that line either, the entire story. I am longing to find out what exactly the price was the Rose paid for the life of her brother. Not so terrible to make it worse than her brother dying, but still something dreadfully awful.
Rose seems to be simultaneously able to stand up to Albus to a greater extent, and yet more scared of him than ever. Albus, I think, is starting to become just a little bit scared of Rose. Maybe not so much that he notices, but he's wary now. She's not going to follow him anymore, and she has bested him at something now.
Your characters are just so delicious! They all have so much depth, they are so incredibly well written.

Author's Response: The price Rose paid---let's just say that paragraph is very telling^^

Rose has a very good reason fro keeping it secret; I'll just say that. Rose is certainly scared of Albus, but what he can do with that knowledge.And I agree that Albus is wary of Rose, being that she sees through his BS and is (almost) as brilliant as him, in regard to magic. He's angry, and very jealous, that she's managed the impossible before him.

:p


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