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Review:kenpo says:
Hey here for our swap. And I'm finally finishing this short story! I loved it so much and then got really busy but HERE I AM and I couldn't be happier.

Lysander is awesome. His character is awesome and quirky and consistent. Everything about him seems spot-on and well thought out. The way you describe him and all of his actions... it's never a generic word. You always choose words that just pin-point who he is, and that's really awesome.

with a fervor that is unrivaled by even the greatest of lovers!

I mean, who says that?! He's awesome and hilarious and you're amazing for writing him so well.

The same thing applies to Lorcan and Cassie (I'm calling her Cassie because I'm lazy and don't feel like going to double-check I've spelt it correctly:) )

Cassie is hilarious. The way you describe her is so fantastic. You're really marvelous at characterisation, I'm so jealous!!
The line about that she didn't just blush, but she went purple, was seriously brilliant.

The plot, too! It's so character-driven, but it stands on it's own as well.

This was such a fantastic short-story. I loved it. I'm so glad I finally got around to finishing it! You did a phenomenal job.

Author's Response: Yay, swappity swap! Sorry once again for being a bad author and not responding to your reviews in a timely manner. :P

Awww, I know that I've said this maybe a zillion times, but THANKS!!! I'm actually really happy with the way that these characters turned out, and Lysander was probably the most fun to write. He's positively dotty, and so he required his own set of adjectives. :)

Who says that? Lysander does! He's an absolute loon, I'm telling you! :D Aww, thanks, but you're the amazing one for reviewing me so much. :)

Cassiopeia is hard to spell. I spelled it wrong SO much while I was writing. *frustration* So yes, Cassie is bananas. In fact, I think that all of the characters are a bit bananas, but Cassie takes the cake (topped with bananas, of course). She is a maniac and a bully, and describing her in such brutish terms gave me a sense of joy that I had never before experienced. :D But don't be jealous--you're pretty darn awesome at characterization yourself!!! :)

Thank you so much for sticking with this story to the end! The lonely last chapter needed your love! :)

Catch you later! :D


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