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Review:kenpo says:
Hey, here for the swap!
This was so nice. I love that you've given them a second chance.

I can't help but think that something bad will happen. There's a part of me that thinks that they're still back in the hospital bed and this is just a hallucination... I hope I'm wrong.

I love how this is written really simply, but in a good way. THe writing just gives this picture of a simple, normal, life.

But you've also hinted that something wicked this way comes (HAHAHA SEE WHAT I DID THERE?)

I couldn't decide what to review, but I'm really glad I picked this one! I honestly sometimes forget that Alice and Frank exist, so I'm looking forward to continuing to explore their characters. Keep writing and let me know when you update! This was great, I hope I'm wrong about any misfortune that they might find in the next chapter(s).

Author's Response: Hi there!

I'm glad you like the simplicity of the writing - this chapter was meant to seem just very normal, so I'm glad that worked :)

Bahah I do see that ;) Yes... a storm is on the horizon. Maybe a metaphor... maybe not. I like your theories, but obviously I can't comment on them as the story is a mystery, so I'll just say vague things about metaphors. Anyway, I like that it is making you think about it!

Thanks so much for the swap, this was lovely! :D

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