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Review:maraudertimes says:
Hi Janelle!

Ooh, so this was interesting! I've never read a fic about Walburga black, but this was surprisingly amazing.

But first things first: "Across the room, I Alphard is mumbling in his sleep." Slight typo?

Anyways, the way you've portrayed Walburga is different than what I could have imagined. She does not seem like the Walburga I've read about, especially because the one in the books hates everyone who isn't pure and proud of it. I'm curious to see if you explore how she becomes like that, and if it might have to do with Orion.

The fact that Alphard doesn't seem to be taken with the puritanical ways that the Blacks are notorious for either is also very interesting. They still do not believe that muggles are anything their equal, but it seems that Sirius isn't the only one to have doubts on the extreme purist views of his family.

Poor Walburga, destined to marry Orion. I do wonder what his secret is. As mentioned before, does it have anything to do with how Walburga becomes how she is?

And Kreacher! I've never seen him painted in such a nice light, other than in DH, so it was a pleasant surprise. I quite enjoyed how he would bring Walburga and Alphard little snacks and how he would let them sleep in on Christmas Day.

Needless to say, this is different from anything else I have ever read and I really enjoyed it! It's very nicely written and has great potential, what with you at the helm! Keep up the good work!

Lo:)

Author's Response: Lo!

Yes, slight typo. :p I've been meaning to fix that one.

Thanks for the great feedback on all the characters. I do hope they grow on the readers well and are well enough written.

Thanks!

-Janelle


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