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Review:800 words of heaven says:
REVIEW SWAP!

Finally! Some explanations! I love explanations! Explanations are great! I especially like how you've managed to build an entirely new world inside HP's already quite huge one. Fanfic is great that way, and I'm intrigued to learn more.

Is Grace the way she is because she hasn't spent time around people her own age? I can't remember what things were like for her at Noctem, but it sounds as if she never learnt the rules concerning communication with people her own age. Or is that just part of who she is? Her powers make her so different, and so far she's been living with people who are different like her, that it makes sense that she doesn't quite know what to do around people who for lack of a better word are "ordinary".

Ooh! I wonder what her connection with Snape is? I don't really like him as a character in the series, so I'm really excited about the direction you'll take him in.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Whoo! Explanations! -_- This world is complicated, on top of HP's huge one...what did I get myself into? ;)

Mostly, Grace hasn't spent time with many people outside of Anne or Albus. She has virtually no social graces (gold stars for a pun) at this point in the story, for, yeah, just that.

A Snape-hater? You're trying to break my heart, yeah? :D Well, whether or not you like him in this may depend on one of the two directions I've been playing with near the end of the story... leaning towards the not-so-much.

Thanks for the swap!

-Rumpel


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