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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey Grace! Here with your third review!

Ah, this was such a great start to the story with such an exciting premise and I hope that thereís more along the way soon! I really loved how Aphrodite was just so bored and full of disdain for humans and their boring lives. It made me laugh a lot and very much the same as how I envisaged her character. She was just hilarious!

Then the arrival of her husband Hephaestus! That made me laugh even more with the way he was soppy about her and she couldnít care less and openly recognised that. I always felt a little sorry for him, but they really are polar opposites so it could never have really worked out all that well. Gah, I just love your characterisation with all the Gods itís so much fun! Then Ares was great too!

I loved how she was just like Iím bored, Iím going to England :P Silyl Hephaestus ending up there too, but maybe George and Angelina will help the pair of them fall in love with one another too. I guess you never really know with these crazy gods! Haha, I did love how she was describing Diagon Alley to him though because it was funny to see too mythological/magical things collide together.

Ah, I loved how she chose them but you need to write more now! I really canít wait to read on because this was such a great and fun to the story which needs to have another chapter asap!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hello Kiana!

I'm so happy to hear that you liked the beginning and there is most definitely another chapter coming soon, I sent it to my beta and I should have it up pretty soon.

Aphrodite and Hephaestus are polar opposites, I don't understand why they were married in the Greek myths anyway, they're almost nothing alike.

We'll see, maybe George and Angelina will really help Hephaestus and Aphrodite fall in love. Or maybe she's just going to realise who she really has feelings for in the end or maybe not. She might just decide that she's better off by herself than with a man.

The next chapter should be coming out soon (I hope). Thanks for your review.


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