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Review:marinahill says:
Here for my half of the review swap!

Aww this is sweet. At the start I wasn't sure I was going to warm to Scorpius. He seemed to be leading Albus on a bit with no care for how quickly Albus was growing attached. But then we get to see the other side to Scorpius, the side of him that's under pressure at home to uphold the family honour. Scorpius is conflicted for sure, and that comes across really really well.

I liked the tender moment between Scorpius and his mother, too. It's always hard to impart wisdom to someone younger like that, but I think she almost puts it into perspective. Scorpius is young and he has to think about the rest of his life, not just what he wants right now. And I like that their objection really just isn't about the slash, it's about him not being whimsical and rash.

Nice work :)

Marina

Author's Response: Hello!!

I meant for Scorpius to come off as a bit iffy. He's flawed and not entirely likable at this point. I did want to show his issues at home to give him more context though. I'm glad that worked.

The Asotira/Scorpius moment felt important for me to put in there. I didn't want their issue to just be with him being gay but the potential long term impacts to the family.

Thank you so much for an awesome review! I'm really glad you enjoyed this.

-Rose


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