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Review:toomanycurls says:
Review swap!

This is an incredibly captivating prologue! It starts off so intense but doesn't slow down to give a ton of back story - which I love!

It's a bit heartbreaking that Victoire is writing to Rob (whoever he is) on the walls of her cell. I like to think that Rob might one day hear about or find out about it. Just a guess, but I think Rob is a child.

I can't help but wonder why it's better off for Teddy that his leg stay broken. Teddy's reaction to hearing about the letter to Rob makes me think that he might be Teddy and Victoire's son. Okay, maybe not if the arrived as best friends. Maybe Rob is Victoire's boyfriend person. That could explain why she's wondering about him forgiving her.

You write with such visual acuity - especially where they're forced against the chicken coop. It just seemed so realistic to me. There's such a wonderful sense of urgency as they're escaping. Without going into a lot of elaboration, you've made Teddy and Victoire very complex and showed their intense relationship.

Ah!! Ending on a cliffy is just mean. You have a lovely intro to what seems like a great story!

-Rose

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